Another subscriber has sent in a song for some constructive criticism, feedback, and ideas in general. Like the last video, I have one rule for this video: I will not criticize for the sake of criticism. It will only be *constructive* criticism. I am always nervous to hear these on camera, but as you’ll hear, it’s actually quite good once again with some great guitar playing and guitar parts. It is John’s long-held dream to bring his songs to Nashville to record with a band of session players. In the spirit of helping a guy out, his Bandcamp link is below. You can purchase this song and help him realize this dream!
This is becoming a really fun series on the channel. Pro tips, feedback, constructive criticism, production ideas for YOUR songs. Send ‘em in! Be forewarned: I do charge a small fee.
If you’d like to support John, here is his Bandcamp link: https://monotones1.bandcamp.com/track/different-shapes
Chapters below, but first…
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CHAPTERS:
0:00 Welcome and what this video is all about
0:50 John’s email
3:27 John’s rig for the guitars and bass on this track
4:39 I will listen through and make a chart just like last time
5:02 My rig for playing ideas for John
6:22 Away we go!
7:49 My first thought
9:41 This feels like I’m a kid again in my dad’s garage
11:55 PRO TIP #1
14:38 PRO TIP #2
18:03 Let’s continue listening and charting…
20:44 Feedback on guitar playing and tones
21:41 It is nice to have a harmonic departure at the bridge!
22:52 Ideas on dynamics and the shape of the song.
25:46 I hear the small layers of interest added for the chorus, but we need more
26:18 How would cutting this song in Nashville look?
27:24 Summary of ideas and thoughts
28:18 Thanks for watching, I hope this is helpful to you all!
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